Cross Country recount

             Cross country Recount Wow, it's cross country it came so fast, I can't wait to run.  I looked at mum she was running around making sure everything was set up. I thought to myself mum would be great at cross country We should be teachers cross country. Well people had just arrived at our farm. O wow the mud was so squishy there was a shoe pile and it was sunny and that was great. Finally we had started it took forever.  It was so fast my race started I warm up and then Boom I was running my little heart out, as I got into the track  I felt weird I didn't know what to say I was so pumped about the race I could hear my heart Bum Bum Bum I had to keep going. I could hear my dad shouting out go Alyx go Alyx I love my dad he supports me in everything I do. Finally I got to the end and could not breathe I asked myself did I actually just do that 3 km run I came 3 third Place and I heard that my brothers came in 1st place both of them wow I said. Well, you can't really compare me to my brothers I'm good at dance and they're good at running WOW!!!!!!!!!!

My Learning goals week 3

   Ideas
  My deeper features learning goal for this
   week, is to expand my creativity to the next 
   level of thinking, by learning variety
   sentences.
   My surface features goal  for this week is my  compound, complex,  and simple sentences.