100 word micro story

The Lonely Star

One ordinary Saturday night Olivia and two year old brother
Toby were getting there coats on to go watch the 
meteor shower on their balcony.  Just as it was starting
The clouds covered the brightly shining moon and all you
could see was the one star shining in the sky.
Then Toby said that star looks a little bit lonely 
yeah he is the only one in the sky shining.
Suddenly there was a big bang in the sky then
a huge round thing shot out into the dark
and was carrying all of the stars and lit everything up.



Something I enjoyed about writing this micro story is that you can use your imagination.

( There is 10 words in every line that is why it looks a little bit funny )

My holiday moment in time.

I saw all of the chaotic work Mum had put into Brody's 7th birthday party.

I felt warm and fuzzy when she snuggled up close to me.

I wondered if the sand would erupt of how much noise the motorbike was making?

I heard the crackling ice snapping and cracking when I stepped on it.

I smelt the hot steaming pot cooking my delicious dinner.

What did you do on your holiday?


W.A.L.T: write a detailed story or moment in time about our holiday.

Our class had to write A Moment in Time or a story about our holiday with lots of describing in words
to give everyone that detail on what they did on there holiday.