The Lonely Star
One ordinary Saturday night Olivia and two year old brother
Toby were getting there coats on to go watch the
meteor shower on their balcony. Just as it was starting
The clouds covered the brightly shining moon and all you
could see was the one star shining in the sky.
Then Toby said that star looks a little bit lonely
yeah he is the only one in the sky shining.
Suddenly there was a big bang in the sky then
a huge round thing shot out into the dark
and was carrying all of the stars and lit everything up.
Something I enjoyed about writing this micro story is that you can use your imagination.
( There is 10 words in every line that is why it looks a little bit funny )
Hi Alyx,
ReplyDeleteLily here loved reading your blog post it was really cool and interesting to read. Great job
A nice little micro-story Alyx with a different twist at the end. Well done!
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Hi Alyx Jason here from Paroa school
ReplyDeletethat is a nice little short story.
overall it is a nice bog post
Your sincerely Jason
Yo, Carter from Paroa school.
ReplyDeleteThat story is really interesting and creative. I find it fun reading all of these 100 word micro stories that your class has done. It seems you all have amazing imaginations.
Keep up the good work.
Carter.